Drafting and Planning: Double Page Spread Improvements

 Here is my improved double page spread:

I have removed some of the introductory text, as it went on about and didn't talk about anything important. I also added page numbers as they're a vital part of a magazine. I added a Twitter link to give Lily of the Valley an online presence, to make it more realistic and make the artist more accessible to the audience. I also included a selling line at the bottom of the article to help advertise his album, which I have done because it makes it seem like an album is really being sold, and makes it obvious to the reader when it's sold so it can draw in an audience for George.